First rule of drawing nude variants of clothed characters.
Boobs keep their shape regardless of what undergarments (or lack thereof) are present. Thus you don't need to redraw the boobs either sagging or pushed together.
First rule of drawing nude variants of clothed characters.
Boobs keep their shape regardless of what undergarments (or lack thereof) are present. Thus you don't need to redraw the boobs either sagging or pushed together.
Oh, now I understand.
uhh, you forgot to gore him.
General rule of advice: Don't automatically assume you're right and everyone else is wrong, especially when you don't have that much experience. If you're not able to accept that, you will not be able to improve, not as an artist, not as an animator, and not as a person.
That being said, there will still be a few people who would say shit just to be assholes, but being able to differentiate them with proper criticism is itself a skill you can't always 100%, but can still be accurate with practice. The same is true with art, animation, or other forms of content creation. If you don't want to fail in these regards, ideally you need to be able to accept, and later overcome any possible shortcomings, flaws, and biases.
I'm hoping this review would put you on the right path. A path that's hopefully not fueled by negativity. The internet is not the safe space you expected it to be, and Newgrounds is especially not that type of place. If this still gets me 'banned', so be it. It's not against NG's rules to give criticism.
A better rate
I like my jokes how I like my beef. Where is it?
Did you look under the tray?
She seems angry as opposed to sad in this version.
Maybe make the eyelashes and eyebrows droop downwards instead of up?
I thought I've seen this character here before. Maybe another artist drew them as fanart. Maybe I'm confusing them with another character, but anyway: welcome to Newgrounds! Nice and funky.
Given your themes, it's kinda odd this one is rated E. Still an awesome blend of styles though!
I like that worm-snake-turret thing.
Don't be fooled: "Onion Girl" on top-left corner, below the zombie is actually a cosplaying Waldo. She's actually located on the bottom half at the exact same horizontal position. (in other words, kinda obvious)
That being said, it's not hard to appreciate all the different Waldos (or Wally in some regions) scattered throughout sharing her colour palette, many of them doing their own thing.
There's also this brown-skinned person just above the title, dunno who that is, but a nice addition still.
Took me at least 10 seconds to figure out this isn't Wavetro.
Whatever's supposed to be uploaded here is not loading.
EDIT: There it goes!
Speak now or forever hold your peace.
Who gives a muffin?
Shits in all 4 Portals
Joined on 8/20/20