Anonymous-Frog's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Apple 3 🍎🥣]

Barely been a week since the last short was made. at least 30 in the last year alone.

Slapstick is nice, as are the character designs, but the overall presentation is on par with 9th grader's Flipaclip animation. It feels cheap, as if it took less than 2 days to make start to finish.

That doesn't mean it's an awful movie, or awful series. it's just means that as a standalone submission, the simplistic visuals, combined with an ultra-short production time and a thinly stretched runtime, means it's technically inferior compared to other similarly scored submissions (one example: the Sword Child series by kubernikus18)

You shouldn't need to be rushed to make these things. If anything, the quicker production time means you should be able to produce longer toons.
This and Healer could've easily been full movies from the start rather than broken up into 50 second parts.

[Tank Vixens Declassified.]

You made a good first impression with that Deltarune Dragon's Lair animation, but this one has those unmistakable, typical DeviantArt vibes, which not a lot of people on this site are into. Just a heads up.

[Demo Reel 2024]

Although your employers wouldn't mind, for the sake of submitting this to Newgrounds, I have to give minus points for using Kevin MacLeod music, specifically "that one" which doesn't even fit.

Otherwise, great reel! A lot of high-profile stuff like with Yotta, Titmouse and such.

[elections coming up, (G/\y Dying of /\i.ds, )]

not enough RFK

[Bartdoodle (1997)]

Ah, the retro VHS filter. It's not a crappy 4-frame doodle, it's an aesthetic!

[Magic Trick (2022)]

Red undershirt and a pixie cut.

I thought he had a tie and a flat top.

[Super Turbo Power Punch MAXED Episode 1]

Just so you know, you can edit and swap out the video from the original upload and republish it.
https://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/943039

lpart responds:

oh i did not know that! Thank you!

[Infiltration Outfit! part II]

I'm not one to talk, but both outfits look like ass.

Retrogoblin8 responds:

Hahaha well, they show too much ass, it's an ass outfit

[Brawl Stars - Bibi Gets Griff'd]

I haven't seen a cartoon this stiff and lifeless since my internet shut off in the middle of a Family Guy marathon.

[Kowloon 1-1 - Gig in the Big City]

Yeah, this is barely animated. Not even voiced.

But even for a motion comic the drawings look sketchy and unpolished, sort of like an animatic, the only real effect is a fade-in/out between panels. I get that this is probably your first time making this sort of stuff, and there is potential, it just needs to be bigger and better.

ScarletSentinel responds:

Appreciate the feedback!